Dear
Alasdair,
Thank you
for sending all your info the Station forecourt proposals, it is most welcome.
If your latest release hasn’t yet gone to press I think you need an amendment to
paragraph 3, line 5: ‘It is’ needs to be inserted before ‘The point’, or ‘that’
later in the sentence should be deleted, to read either “It is the point where
you join… that is” or “ The point where you join…is”
I hope
this makes sense.
Best wishes,
and good luck!
Val